comments included colour usage for my filmmaking piece and proportion matters for my water sports piece..
my boat seem kinda big and from far, it seems like and "E" instead of the intended "F".
for my filmmaking piece, it seems like "FAX" instead of "FA". Will try to shorten the film reel to make the "A" stand out more.. gotta change some colours too. =)
anyway, here are the final 2:

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The dragonboat one is a good one. U really have a lot of aspiration to kill NTU.
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