Tuesday, February 12, 2008

Assignment 1: 1 x 2 Final Artwork

Had the crit for the final 2 art work today in class..

comments included colour usage for my filmmaking piece and proportion matters for my water sports piece..

my boat seem kinda big and from far, it seems like and "E" instead of the intended "F".

for my filmmaking piece, it seems like "FAX" instead of "FA". Will try to shorten the film reel to make the "A" stand out more.. gotta change some colours too. =)

anyway, here are the final 2:



1 comment:

someone somewhere said...

The dragonboat one is a good one. U really have a lot of aspiration to kill NTU.